Name : Pramudita Dewi Cahya

SRN : 12340022

Writing Class III

1.The theme in my narrative paragraph : Zipper

2.                                                       Zipper

My name  is Pramudita Dewi Cahya. I’am one of student in UMM,English Department.i have an experience in the campus.

Last year,about  second semesters,i have a schedule at 13:00 oclock.but i’m forgot what the subject.its have long right !.one day,i’m very tired,after i go out from campus about 11:30 oclock so i went to my boarding house.and then i’m very sleepy.so i’m slept in the bed and it’s very comfortable.

Suddently,the time is 12:30 oclock,so i’m hurry to went the campus,and i used purple blouse,its very short with the long black skirt.so without ate some food i prepared the book of scedule while the time 12:50 oclock.so  dont know what i think in my mind,it’s only go to campus without came late hat’s my mind.and then i get my motocycle because  always rode motocycle if i went to the campus.then i went to campus quickly,after arrived in the campus,i put my motocycle in front of D building.and i think i came late because there are no my friends.and in second floor i met some boys they are student’s D3 computer,but i don’t know who are and they are laughing after look at me. while  i go up in third floors and i met my friends and they are give me suggest to repair my zipper.so i’m very shock actually my zipper is down. i don’t know if my zipper is down ,my be because i’m very hurry  went to the campus.and now that i know why that’s boys laughing after look at me,actually because they are look at my skirt,because my zipper is down.Oh my god .! im very embarashedand during i rode my motocycle in the street with the zipper down.

So now that i don’t used that purple blouse until now.one i usd that purple blouse i got embarashed,although that’s new purple blouse.so thats my experience and until nor i remember that moment and then if i go to campus and every where i always repair my zipper first.

Direct;

a.blue :introduction

b.brown : plot

c.red : characteristic ( forgetfull)

d.green :setting ( in the campus )

e.purple :climax

f black : conclusion

3.Youre writing must have purpose  ; My purpose is we must be carefully to do something and must be pattient and accurate,if we don’t have that characteristic you can get embarashment like me.so you should be carefully

4.Use clear and understandable language.

5..You can use a pronoun "I" in your narrative writing.

5.Pay attention on text organizing structure.

7.Underline your topic sentence (if any).

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