NAME : PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

NPM :12340022

WRITING CLASS

1.Give description on how to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion.

Adequate a paragraph is adequately developed when it describes explains and supports the topic sentence.beginning a paragraph with a topic sentence is one of the best ways to achieve clarity and unity in one’s writing.the function of a topic sentence is to describe what the paragraph will be about.such that the reader has clear expectations about what will follow.and cohesion is achieve when writers connect their organized parts with sufficiently clear and numerous signals like the words “finally,thus,therefore,however etc.to make the emerging lines of their arguments.writing must have not only coherence an affective design,but cohesion and explicit set of “book and ties” that ensure a readers interest an comprehension.

2. Tell me more about cohesion

cohesion is achieve when writers connect their organized parts with sufficiently clear and numerous signals like the words “finally,thus,therefore,however etc.to make the emerging lines of their arguments.cohesion does not spawn coherence.cohesioin is determined by lexically and gramaticaly.cohesion is the result of giving readers the right kind of explicit help in figuring out design.cohesion give the readers the clues for discovering coherence.

3. write more the difference between coherence and cohesion

Cohesion does not spawn coherence.cohesion is determined by lexically and gramatically over intersential relationship whereas coherence is based on semantic relationship.cohesion describes the way in which a text is tied together by linguistic devices such as and so we see,additionally,therefore,however,and on the other hand etc.coherence if it’s constituent sentence follow on the one from the other in an orderly fashion so that the reader can make sense of the entire text.

4. show which text or sentence that shows adequate or inadequate cohesion on youre paragraph by underlining or putting in the table

The Tittle : PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

I will describe about my self,because i want to know you all,and i want to have many friends and i hope you all become my friends too.this paragraph is about me my general my hobby  and my life in specifiecly.

My name is Pramudita Dewi cahya .i’m 19th years old.i was born in Sumberhadi,East lampung.September 18 -1994.i live in Iringmulyo 15 A.you can call me “ dita or dewi”.my friends always call me with my nick name.i’m one of student in Muhammadiyah University Metro specifiecly in English Department of faculty

I’m a girl specifiecly is teneeger,i have medium body,white skin,long hair and stupid girl and lazy.that’s my characteristic in this live i have the best thing there is my parents because them make me happy,and i love them.and hobby is watching korean movie like a ghost,the heirs,my love from another star,master sun and etc.and i like reading book story and cooking.i interested about that because if i like a korean movie i have inspired from the actor or actress action in this live that’s very important for me.and then the activity in my free time are: sleeping,playing with my friends in boarding house and waching korean movie together.

All of those about me i wanna conclude ,my name is pramudita dewi cahya my nick name dita or dewi .but my my friends always call me pram.so i hate it.because i never called pram.that’s like a boy.so i like called dita or dewi because i’m a girl.hank you that’s about me.how abaout you.! Tell me more J

Defferent Color

·         Blue : introduction

·         Red : identifcation (body paragraph)

·         Purple: description(body paragraph)

·         Black: concluding

5. you should explain why youre text or sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion.

 i give the underlining for the cohesion because there are much the word  as conjuction the centence.

NAME : Pramudita Dewi Cahya

SRN : 12340022

WRITING CLASS

1.The way to write adequete and inadequate unity.

·         A paragraph is adequately developed  when it describes,explains and supports the topic sentence.generally a paragraph which consist of only two or the sentence is under developed ( adequate)

·         Unity refers to the ettent to which all of of the ideas contained within a given paragraph “ hang together”.in away that is easy for the reader to understand ( unity).

2.COHERENCE refers to the extent to which the flow of ideas in a paragraph is easily understood by the reade.

3.Despcriptive paragraph(describing me)

4.Tittle : PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

I will describe about my self,because i want to know you all,and i want to have many friends and i hope you all become my friends too.this paragraph is about me my general my hobby  and my life in specifiecly.

My name is Pramudita Dewi cahya .i’m 19th years old.i was born in Sumberhadi,East lampung.September 18 -1994.i live in Iringmulyo 15 A.you can call me “ dita or dewi”.my friends always call me with my nick name.i’m one of student in Muhammadiyah University Metro specifiecly in English Department of faculty

I’m a girl specifiecly is teneeger,i have medium body,white skin,long hair and stupid girl and lazy.that’s my characteristic in this live i have the best thing there is my parents because them make me happy,and i love them.and hobby is watching korean movie like a ghost,the heirs,my love from another star,master sun and etc.and i like reading book story and cooking.i interested about that because if i like a korean movie i have inspired from the actor or actress action in this live that’s very important for me.and then the activity in my free time are: sleeping,playing with my friends in boarding house and waching korean movie together.

All of those about me i wanna conclude ,my name is pramudita dewi cahya my nick name dita or dewi .but my my friends always call me pram.so i hate it.because i never called pram.that’s like a boy.so i like called dita or dewi because i’m a girl.hank you that’s about me.how abaout you.! Tell me more J

5.Defferent Color

·         Blue : introduction

·         Red : identifcation (body paragraph)

·         Purple: description(body paragraph)

·         Black: concluding

Name : Pramudita Dewi Cahya

NPM : 12340022

WRITING 3

DESCRIPTION TEXT

Description text is we can description about something,that we can see,tasted,and sound.but the specifiectly about something that we can see in fact,which says what a person or a thing is like.

Purpose description text is to decription about something

Generic structure:

1.identification :identification / which someone or something want to description.

2.description : to explain about something mention the part, quality and specifiec thing.

Language Features:

> The use of adjectives and compound adjectives.

>Using present tense

Ex:

JOSHUA

Joshua is an indonesian actor.actually he is singer but after joshua teneger he’s become presenter in a television program that’s “ANTV” In beliave or not.

First,joshua is handsome boy but he have black skin,pointed nose,tall about 170 cm.

NARRATVE

  Narrative text is story tellng that happend in the past, There are many types of narrative. They can be imaginary, factual or a combination of both. They may include fairy stories, mysteries, science fiction, romances, horror stories, adventure stories, fables, myths and legends, historical narratives, ballads, slice of life, personal experience.
Language feature
Using past tense

Purpose
The basic purpose of narrative is to entertain, to gain and hold interest the reader’s.
Generic structure of narrative text.

Ø  Orientation: (Introduction) in which the characters, setting and time of the story are established. Usually answers who? When? Where?

Ø  Complication or problem: The complication usually involves the main character(s) (often mirroring the complications in real life).

Ø  Resolution: There needs to be a resolution of the complication. The complication may be resolved for better or worse/happily or unhappily. Sometimes there are a number of complications that have to be resolved. These add and sustain interest and suspense for the reade

Ex:

The eagle and cock

Once upon a time there life a friendship that’s the eagle and cock.they are always playing together.someday cock was asked with eagle”hi.. friend .you have wings but you can high flew and i can’t althought i have wings too.why?and and eagle say” i have a gold needle so  can high flew.

Someday,the eagle was borrowed his gold needle to cock,but the cock was kept the gold needle,and  two weeks ago and than now the cock can high flew ,and he was very happy.but he is forgot with his promise to eagle to kept him needle.and the eagle came with his and actually his needle was lost.and the eagle very angry and ate child of cock.and cock was cried and apology because have lose his needle.

And the last the eagle accept his appology but he must promise to kept thing to others.and they are friendship again.

Explain:

Orientation : once upon a time until high flew

complication :someday until lose his needle

resolution :and the last.

Coda : we should keep thing the others

EXPOSITORY

Exposition is a type of oral or written discourse that is used to explain, describe, give information or inform.such as process and procedure paragraph.

Generic structure:

1.topc sentence

2.supporting sentence

3.concluding sentence.

Language feature:

1.using process verb

2.using identifinite transiton.

Ex:

How to be a good muslim

The method how to be a good muslim are; first,you are pray five time to ALLAH SWT because .second,to fast in month of ramadhan because to fast in month of ramadhan get he big charity and who can to hold back lust.thirth,you should avoid disobedience to god or to go away from prohibition order of god like as thief,lie etc..fourth,who has made the pilgrimage to mecca if who one rich that’s obliged .and the last ,honestly, because we live needed trusted with other people.