Name : Pramudita Dewi Cahya

SRN:12340022

WRITING 3

1.Descriptive paragraph

2.300-500 words

3.-youre dream family

   -a person you admire

   - a place you feel safe

Title

A person you admire

Do you know guys who person me admire? You can to guess,who is she?

My name is Pramudita Dewi Cahya,i was born September-18-1994.i live in Sumberhadi village,melinting East Lampung.ok friends i will to tell you about a person you admire,she is my mom.because what?because she is my hero.hero’s my family ,my mom help my father to get the money for us.she is everything.i want to do everything for her.she is work hard for us.me and my younger brother.she works at junior high school as a teacher.my mom always go to every where during she get the knowledge .she look for much money to pay school for us ,and this is not easy and cheap guys.i am right ?actually i will get graduate s1 in UMM and i want my mom continous my younger brother education,but my mom forbid me and direct me to continou my education in s2 .and my mom just know that i study hard.i don’t know and what should i do .i just to do what i can .only try to study,and study hard,get the knowledge so much.my mom is a kind person,beautiful woman,patiend and i love her so much.i am very proud with her and my father too.i love them.she is always teach me how to become good girl,and how to obey the rule of my family and then.i often far from my mother because i still continous my education in s1 and i will embrance my mom always.i always remember effort of my mom.we are love her and proud with her.and i effort to not disappoint and respect to her. The one person which i love only my mom.

NAME : PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

SRN : 12340022

WRITING CLASS III

1.The title narrative paraghraph : if i could back in time

	If I Could  Back In Time
	The time was very important for people life. All of people needs a time,we never knew when the time will stoped.The experience in the past until now absolutely needs the time to go to this world.and the world in the past and world now was very differented.
Orientation

	I have one experience in the past. I’m not clever student and not also stupid student.but during i’m Elementary school i never leaf in the class but i ever got the cham in two class and got the cham in six class in the sains contest .i’m very happy in that time.but in the past i’m a naughty student and poor student .my parents is farmers and we always less the money. And in the junior high school my mom is the history teacher and i went to my grand ma to the next studyin there.it’s almost same in elementary school.i never got the cham in this class,but i have friends they are very kind with me.but in that time i know what is the boy friend ? in three class junior high school i knew my friend in my class mate.and i like him and in the past i have a handphone.so i always sent message for him.and then i went home in my parents suddenly my parents opened my phone cells,and there is message from a my boy, and my mom was angry and i was cried in my bedroom and my mom was direct me to stoped my studied if i only got the boy friend.so since i got the blast my mom i never brought handphone until senior high school .but i absolutely have a boy friend until now but the different person :D.
Complication

Resolution	Absolutely i f i could back in time i never tried got the boy friend and seriously in my studied.actualy have i  a boy friend was very dizzy and lost the consentration in my studied.but that is depend in our self how to control  the schedule,time and place,and it self.so you should used youre time like as money because the time was very impotant.

NAME : PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

SRN : 12340022

1.Tell the description of narrative writing and how to differ from other writing genre

Narrative is a text foocusing some specific  participants that have several structural features making different from othr genres and how to different from other genre writing is : the categories of narrative that have similiar technique and content .the two broadest divisions of genre are fiction and nonfiction,

Fiction is the class of literature comparising works of imaginative narrative.and nonfiction is the branch of literature comparising works of narrative prose dealing with on offering opinion or conjectures upon fact,and reality including biography ,history,and the essay.so this is solution how to different narrative writing with writing other genres.

2. write the step how to make a narrative writing.dont forget to give example for every step.

EARTHQUARKE
	An unforgettable experience in my life was a magnitude 6,3 earthquake.i was at home with my older sisterand younger brother.
Orientation

	Suddenly,our house started shaking.at first,none of us realized what was happening.then my sisteryelled”earthquake”!get unde something.i half rolled and half crawled across the romm to get under the dinning table.
Complication

	The earthquake lasted than a minuted,but it seemed like a year to us.at  least the shaking stopped.for a minue or two,we were too scared to move.the tried to call our parent a work.and go out at home.
RESOLUTION

3.rewrite youre narrative writing  and show or under line the topic sentence on youre writing.

Zipper

My name  is Pramudita Dewi Cahya. I’am one of student in UMM,English Department.i have an experience in the campus and very emberassing moment.

Last year,about  second semesters,i have a schedule at 13:00 oclock.but i’m forgot what the subject.its have long right !.one day,i’m very tired,after i go out from campus about 11:30 oclock so i went to my boarding house.and then i’m very sleepy.so i’m slept in the bed and it’s very comfortable.

Suddently,the time is 12:30 oclock,so i’m hurry to went the campus,and i used purple blouse,its very short with the long black skirt.so without ate some food i prepared the book of scedule while the time 12:50 oclock.so  dont know what i think in my mind,it’s only go to campus without came late hat’s my mind.and then i get my motocycle because  always rode motocycle if i went to the campus.then i went to campus quickly,after arrived in the campus,i put my motocycle in front of D building.and i think i came late because there are no my friends.and in second floor i met some boys they are student’s D3 computer,but i don’t know who are and they are laughing after look at me. while  i go up in third floors and i met my friends and they are give me suggest to repair my zipper.so i’m very shock actually my zipper is down. i don’t know if my zipper is down ,my be because i’m very hurry  went to the campus.and now that i know why that’s boys laughing after look at me,actually because they are look at my skirt,because my zipper is down.Oh my god .! im very embarashedand during i rode my motocycle in the street with the zipper down.

So now that i don’t used that purple blouse until now.one i usd that purple blouse i got embarashed,although that’s new purple blouse.so thats my experience and until nor i remember that moment and then if i go to campus and every where i always repair my zipper first.

Direct;

a.blue :introduction

b.brown : plot

c.red : characteristic ( forgetfull)

d.green :setting ( in the campus )

e.purple :climax

f black : conclusion

topic sentence : under line

4.explain why youre sentence is called ad the topic sentence.

Because the topic sentence is the main idea from the story.usualy you can find the topic sentence in the first paraghraph as introduce the paraghraph.