NAME : PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

NPM :12340022

WRITING CLASS

1.Give description on how to write paragraph with adequate and inadequate cohesion.

Adequate a paragraph is adequately developed when it describes explains and supports the topic sentence.beginning a paragraph with a topic sentence is one of the best ways to achieve clarity and unity in one’s writing.the function of a topic sentence is to describe what the paragraph will be about.such that the reader has clear expectations about what will follow.and cohesion is achieve when writers connect their organized parts with sufficiently clear and numerous signals like the words “finally,thus,therefore,however etc.to make the emerging lines of their arguments.writing must have not only coherence an affective design,but cohesion and explicit set of “book and ties” that ensure a readers interest an comprehension.

2. Tell me more about cohesion

cohesion is achieve when writers connect their organized parts with sufficiently clear and numerous signals like the words “finally,thus,therefore,however etc.to make the emerging lines of their arguments.cohesion does not spawn coherence.cohesioin is determined by lexically and gramaticaly.cohesion is the result of giving readers the right kind of explicit help in figuring out design.cohesion give the readers the clues for discovering coherence.

3. write more the difference between coherence and cohesion

Cohesion does not spawn coherence.cohesion is determined by lexically and gramatically over intersential relationship whereas coherence is based on semantic relationship.cohesion describes the way in which a text is tied together by linguistic devices such as and so we see,additionally,therefore,however,and on the other hand etc.coherence if it’s constituent sentence follow on the one from the other in an orderly fashion so that the reader can make sense of the entire text.

4. show which text or sentence that shows adequate or inadequate cohesion on youre paragraph by underlining or putting in the table

The Tittle : PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

PRAMUDITA DEWI CAHYA

I will describe about my self,because i want to know you all,and i want to have many friends and i hope you all become my friends too.this paragraph is about me my general my hobby  and my life in specifiecly.

My name is Pramudita Dewi cahya .i’m 19th years old.i was born in Sumberhadi,East lampung.September 18 -1994.i live in Iringmulyo 15 A.you can call me “ dita or dewi”.my friends always call me with my nick name.i’m one of student in Muhammadiyah University Metro specifiecly in English Department of faculty

I’m a girl specifiecly is teneeger,i have medium body,white skin,long hair and stupid girl and lazy.that’s my characteristic in this live i have the best thing there is my parents because them make me happy,and i love them.and hobby is watching korean movie like a ghost,the heirs,my love from another star,master sun and etc.and i like reading book story and cooking.i interested about that because if i like a korean movie i have inspired from the actor or actress action in this live that’s very important for me.and then the activity in my free time are: sleeping,playing with my friends in boarding house and waching korean movie together.

All of those about me i wanna conclude ,my name is pramudita dewi cahya my nick name dita or dewi .but my my friends always call me pram.so i hate it.because i never called pram.that’s like a boy.so i like called dita or dewi because i’m a girl.hank you that’s about me.how abaout you.! Tell me more J

Defferent Color

·         Blue : introduction

·         Red : identifcation (body paragraph)

·         Purple: description(body paragraph)

·         Black: concluding

5. you should explain why youre text or sentence that you underline is categorized into cohesion.

 i give the underlining for the cohesion because there are much the word  as conjuction the centence.